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Starting a new career out of college is often a steep learning curve. While traditional classroom instruction teaches valuable critical thinking, group work, research and writing skills, on-the-job skills can typically only really be learned at work. As someone who is a somewhat recent college graduate, I’ve experienced this trend firsthand. I’ve made my fair share of rookie mistakes and though I’m still far from being an expert, I’ve learned a lot of important skills.
Outlined below are three tips to help new PR professionals cut their teeth on public relations and avoid common rookie mistakes.
No. 1: Practice Email Etiquette
Whether you’re communicating with reporters, clients or team members, a lot of time during the workday is spent reading or writing emails. Due to our dependence on the communication channel, it’s important to understand the basic tenets of email etiquette. Email etiquette plays a huge role in conveying professionalism and ensuring efficiency. A good PR pro knows how to concisely request action without being demanding. Examples might include reminding people of deadlines, offering to help take a project over the finish line, reattaching a document for review, etc. All these practices should be done with a supportive and solutions-oriented tone without sacrificing the expected results.
A good PR pro can also adapt to client preferences (more on that later) to understand when the best time to secure a response from a client is or what their communication style might be (i.e., conversational vs. formal). PR reps should also be able to determine when to “reply all.” A common mistake newer professionals make is to reply directly to the sender, which limits visibility for other team members. Lastly, you should always respond to emails in a timely fashion (i.e., within 24 hours). For example, if a team member sends a request for support on a project, a best practice is to briefly respond and acknowledge the project rather than waiting to respond until you can begin working on the project. Agencies are fast paced and timely responses to email are an important part of keeping activity moving.
No. 2: Maximize Media Briefings
In public relations, one of the things we do regularly is arrange and staff media briefings on subjects relevant to our clients’ business. Briefings generally translate to editorial coverage and they’re also valuable for relationship building. To a less experienced PR person, this role can feel awkward. They might feel like they’re in the way or that their client can handle the conversation. However, a good PR rep should play an active part of nearly every media briefing. PR professionals should:
- Kick things off. At the start of each call or meeting, you will want to introduce the spokesperson and reporter. This gives them an opportunity to clarify titles and align on the topic of discussion before diving in. Remember: Always try to be personable.
- Let the interview play out, but pay attention. Don’t be a passive listener. Rather, take notes and track action items. Especially in tech PR, journalists often request data to back up a claim and the PR staffer will need to take care of any follow-up.
- Chime in if necessary. Occasionally a PR person will need to step in and make a course-correction. It happens rarely, but sometimes a spokesperson can go for too long on a tangent, or a reporter may stray into areas not agreed upon. If this happens, PR pros shouldn’t be afraid to chime in and get things back on track.
- Follow up. After the briefing is over, a best practice is to send a thank you note to the reporter and thought leader(s). Lastly, don’t be afraid to provide feedback to the spokesperson. Constructive feedback will strengthen the relationship and help all parties improve even a strong performance.
No. 3: Understand Client Preferences
Clients value tailored and creative solutions that meet their specific business needs – not a one-size-fits-all approach. To deliver on client expectations, PR pros must understand a client’s industry, its business and its goals. PR teams must also understand how the client prefers to communicate. Assessing and adapting to different client preferences is an art and takes time to develop.
For example, one client might want to be in constant communication. This might look like frequent, short emails or calls. Another client might prefer a hands-off approach, where the PR agency and client connect for a monthly PR call and via email only as needed. Another example is that one client might value quantitative results reporting, while another values qualitative results reporting. Public relations is a client-services industry. PR reps that strive to understand that every client is unique will have a better chance of gaining trust and confidence, and help each client feel like their PR agency is an extended part of their team.
Ultimately, practice in PR makes perfect. Understanding these basic tenets of a successful PR person will be a valuable steppingstone in helping new professionals perfect their craft.
As 2020 ends, many of us working in public relations and marketing are in the process of planning for the new year. Given this, I thought it would be helpful to revisit best practices around the analysis of past results and how to best plan for the future.
Look in the rearview mirror
One good way to begin the planning process is with analysis of past activity and results. We hold ourselves to high standards and this means we must have a good understanding of the outcome of our work. We often achieve strong results analysis by examining key performance indicators including:
- The number of positive articles generated. Often we’ll quantify the numbers of articles by domain authority or by publications we deem to be top tier.
- The number of articles per campaign or announcement. Knowing which campaigns or announcements performed well can be helpful as you look ahead and consider future activity.
- The quality of the articles. We’ll ascertain this by looking at message pull-through or assigning and measuring other criteria such as the number of quotes included from an executive.
- Growth rates. Many of our client engagements span years and, given our bias for continuous improvement, we strive to drive year-over-year growth in both coverage quality and quantity. Our account leaders are responsible for driving and tracking these results.
The bottom line is that as you begin planning you should have answers to the following questions:
- What worked in the past? Why did it work?
- How can we build on our success?
- What campaigns were less successful and what did we learn from them?
- What should we discontinue in the coming year?
Outline goals and objectives
To establish clear and measurable goals or objectives, consider this question that comes from my time working with Pam Edstrom, one of the cofounders of Waggener Edstrom, now WE Communications. Pam was known for asking: “What business problem are we trying to solve?” It is a simple, but important question to consider. You must have a clear sense of what you’re trying to achieve and how it will help the business.
Identify key audiences
Who are you trying to reach? A good plan will include information about the key audiences and the messages that they need to hear and understand. Please remember not all stakeholders have the same needs. They often have unique desires surrounding the promises that they want to see businesses make and keep. For more on this topic, I recommend checking out my blog “Understanding Trust and Why it Matters.”
Think critically
As part of the process, it’s also imperative to take a step back to think critically about the situation in which the company is operating in, especially in relation to the world, industry, and competitors as well as the perceptions of customers, partners and other key stakeholders.
Consider this example that I recently came across in an article about strategic planning in the Harvard Business Review. In it, Deanna Mulligan, the former CEO of the Guardian, recounts her experience at the helm of the company during Hurricane Sandy and how it further shaped her propensity for planning.
Specifically, Mulligan wrote that the experience taught her to “start thinking even longer-term: What were all the things that could go wrong, and how could we protect ourselves from them? Also, what could go right if we were poised to seize the opportunities presented?”
These are excellent questions that PR and marketing practitioners should ask themselves as they think critically about their specific objectives and begin planning to achieve them.
Strategies & tactics
The next part of a strong plan should outline the strategies and tactics that the team will employ to achieve the objectives. Many people confuse these terms. To explain the difference, I like to use the following military analogy.
In the Civil War, the Union had a strategy to control the Mississippi River. The military leaders believed if they could do this, they would have a better chance of achieving their goal of winning the war and preserving the union. To successfully implement this strategy, however, there were many specific and distinct steps that had to be taken. These smaller steps were the tactics that enabled them to implement the strategy.
In public relations, a strategy might be, for instance, to place five op-eds on a particular topic. The tactics would include outlining the article, gathering the proof points to support key claims, drafting the article, circulating it for approval, sharing it with the editorial board, etc. The individual steps the team will take are the tactics. A good plan will outline these in a sufficient manner.
Finally, it is important to consider the probability of success when formulating strategies. You don’t want to outline strategies with a low probability of success or ones that will require heroic action to achieve. Strategies need to be realistic and achievable.
Measuring success
How will we know we were successful in achieving our objectives? It is helpful to have a clear vision and alignment around how you’ll ascertain the achievement of your goals. Some of our clients correlate PR with sales. This is not always easy to do, but with the correct processes in place, it is possible to look at the relation between the volume of press coverage and other things such as the volume of traffic to the website or product sales, for instance. Many of our clients have seen that a year-over-year increase in press coverage correlates with an increase in revenue. Other factors have certainly influenced revenue, but there is a correlation that a statistician could help identify.
I hope this serves as a helpful reminder as you take stock of 2020 and think ahead to 2021.
A rendering of Spaceflight’s Sherpa-FX vehicle. Image courtesy of Spaceflight Inc.
2020, despite the challenges it presented, proved to be another exciting and successful year for our client Spaceflight Inc., the leading launch services and mission management provider.
The space industry didn’t go unaffected by the challenges the pandemic presented, yet Spaceflight still executed five launches, introduced a new innovative service, secured major partnerships, and was acquired by Mitsui & Co., Ltd., in partnership with Yamasa Co., Ltd. With a variety of exciting developments and milestones, we maintained a strong cadence of press releases, demonstrating Spaceflight’s continued momentum regardless of outside challenges.
While these unpredicted and unprecedented circumstances weren’t welcomed, they did present an opportunity from a PR perspective. Many industry leaders and journalists were eager to understand how the pandemic would impact the industry, both in the short term and the long term. To demonstrate the Spaceflight leadership team’s expertise and industry knowledge, we developed and distributed several proactive pitches that highlighted its perspective on how the industry would adapt to the challenges presented by the pandemic or what trends would be created from these unforeseen circumstances. This led to a number of interviews, including podcast interviews and articles that highlighted Spaceflight’s thought leadership and understanding of the industry as a whole.
Finally, one of the most exciting and effective strategies we implemented this year was a virtual media tour. Spaceflight announced its new Sherpa-NG program, a family of ESPA-class space vehicles that are designed to minimize development timelines while maximizing flight and schedule reliability and mission assurance. With everyone’s new comfort around navigating video calls and this new piece of hardware, it felt like the perfect time to execute a virtual media tour. Spaceflight is preparing for the launch of its first vehicle early next year, so there was a piece of hardware ready to show to the media. Not only were we able to demonstrate the progress of this innovative service offering, Spaceflight’s leadership team was also able to discuss the vast benefits of this program and the role this type of hardware will play in the future.
Below are some of the exciting results from this year. Congratulations on a successful 2020, Spaceflight!
- Launchers Get Ready for the Small Satellite Gold Rush—Via Satellite, 1/21/20
- Opportunities grow for smallsat rideshare launches—SpaceNews, 2/6/20
- Spaceflight Industries to sell its satellite rideshare launch business to Japan’s Mitsui & Co. and Yamasa—TechCrunch, 2/11/20
- Spaceflight Industries strikes deal to sell rideshare launch business; will focus on BlackSky satellites—GeekWire, 2/11/20
- Spaceflight Industries says sale of rideshare business a ‘win-win’ for all parties—SpaceNews, 2/19/20
- Spaceflight, BlackSky Separation Will Bring ‘Focus’ to Both Businesses, Execs Say—Via Satellite, 2/19/20
- Firefly Aerospace signs customer Spaceflight for Alpha rocket launch in 2021—TechCrunch, 4/22/20
- Rocket Report: A new Starship moves to the pad, Iran’s surprise launch—Ars Technica, 4/24/20
- Spaceflight signs deal with SpaceX for future rideshare satellite launch slots—GeekWire, 6/17/20
- Spaceflight Gets its First Rideshare Payloads on a SpaceX Starlink Mission—Via Satellite, 6/17/20
- Tiny Satellites: Eyes in the Sky, Thousands of Them—Bloomberg, 7/15/20
- Spaceflight Inc. debuts new orbital transfer vehicle for satellite rideshare rocket launches—TechCrunch, 7/15/20
- Spaceflight Reveals Sherpa-FX Vehicle to Fly Aboard SpaceX Mission—Via Satellite, 7/15/20
- Spaceflight planning three Sherpa launches in 2021—SpaceNews, 8/20/20
- Benchmark to provide propulsion for Spaceflight’s Sherpa-NG—SpaceNews, 8/4/20
- Executive Spotlight: Grant Bonin—Satnews, 11/5/20
- Spaceflight Inc. fills out its line of Sherpa orbital transfer vehicles for small satellites—GeekWire, 11/12/20
- Spaceflight announces Sherpa tug with electric propulsion—SpaceNews, 11/12/20
- Year in Review 2020: Spaceflight-_SatNews, 12/7/20
- #SpaceWatchGL Interviews: Grant Bonin of Spaceflight Inc. – “Our ambitions are clearly beyond LEO”—SpaceWatch.Global, 12/16/20
To say the least, this past year has been one of unprecedented change. The phrase “new normal” has entered our daily lexicon, as the impacts of the COVID-19 pandemic have significantly altered how we live, gather, socialize and work. No person nor business has been immune to the change.
Our client BitTitan, a Seattle-based cloud enablement company that is the developer of MigrationWiz and specializes in managed services automation, is no different. However, as a company that specializes in SaaS-based automated tools and that relied on a dispersed workforce prior to the pandemic, BitTitan found itself uniquely positioned to not only navigate some of the changes brought on by the pandemic, but help other companies do so as well.
Working with Communiqué PR since 2018, BitTitan has provided industry expertise and insight through contributed content and thought leadership articles to publications across the tech and IT industry. Last year, BitTitan’s editorial coverage amounted to 91 articles, with 21 percent of those articles falling into the “top tier” coverage category, meaning the outlet achieved a domain authority (a search engine ranking score) of 75/100 or higher.
This year, BitTitan expanded its thought leadership efforts to extend beyond North America to overseas markets in the United Kingdom, France, Germany and India, to name a few. After all, BitTitan is a global company and needs a global audience.
As the year comes to a close, we tallied the results that BitTitan has achieved. In doing so, we found that, to date, our work with BitTitan has resulted in the following:
- 73 articles published in North America
- 13 articles published in France
- 12 articles published in India
- 9 articles published in Germany
- 8 articles published in the U.K.
… and another article published in Australia for a grand total of 116 articles in 2020, with just over a week left in the year.
Of the articles in North America, 15 percent were published by top-tier outlets. Twenty-five percent of the articles published in the U.K. were by top-tier outlets, while 15 percent of the articles in France were top-tier coverage.
Yes, it’s been one crazy, chaotic year. But fortunately, companies like BitTitan have been around to help other companies move their workloads to the cloud, mobilize remote work plans, implement digital transformations and continue operations. At Communiqué PR, we’re thrilled to work alongside BitTitan and promote the amazing things they’re doing to a global audience.
You can find links to some of BitTitan’s thought leadership articles and international coverage below.
Moving to the Cloud
- VMBlog, Diving all in: The Advantages of Transitioning 100% to the Cloud, March 16, 2020
- CloudTweaks, Why It’s Time for Companies to Move ‘All-In’ on the Cloud, March 17, 2020
- ChannelPro Network, Going All-In on the Cloud, April 23, 2020
- MSP Insights, How To Accelerate A Move To The Cloud In Response To COVID-19, May 4, 2020
Tips on Working Remotely
- Next Platform Radio, Next Platform Radio: Frank Suglia, March 9, 2020
- Seattle Business magazine, Working Remotely Is Becoming the New Normal in the Coronavirus Era, March 11, 2020
- VMBlog, VMblog Expert Interview: Frank Suglia of BitTitan Talks Best Practices for Successfully Working Remotely, March 17, 2020
- MSP Insights, How To Stay Engaged, Productive (And Sane) While Working From Home, March 30, 2020
What Our ‘New Normal’ Will Look Like
- TechGenix, ROAD MAP FOR THE ‘NEW NORMAL’: INTERVIEW WITH BITTITAN’S GEEMAN YIP, June 12, 2020
- MSP Insights, How COVID-19 Will Shape Your Client’s ‘New Normal’, June 18, 2020
- Talent Management Excellence, What Our ‘New Normal’ Will Look Like As Businesses Reopen, July 15, 2020
Australia
- CRN Australia, As M&A activity recovers, cloud-based data migration will be crucial, Nov. 5, 2020
The U.K.
- Education Technology, Lightening the lockdown load: part 2, May 6, 2020
- Education Technology, Why higher ed institutions should go all-in on the cloud, May 13, 2020
- Verdict Magazine, REMOTE WORKING, THE FUTURE NORMAL, May 21, 2020
- Collab Magazine, The Benefits of Moving 100% to the Cloud, June 5, 2020
- Computer Weekly – MicroScope, MSPs working through Covid challenges, Aug. 10, 2020
- IT Pro Portal, As more businesses embrace the cloud, consolidation is key, Aug. 19, 2020
- Enterprise Times, How Remote Migrations Play Into Continued Business Success, Sept. 29, 2020
- IT Pro Portal, How MSPs are generating revenue in today’s marketplace, Oct. 27, 2020
France
- La Revue Du Digital, Alstom Urgently Migrates 36,000 Email Users, March 2, 2020
- CIO Online, How Alstom Migrated 36,000 BPOS-D Users to Office 365 in One Month, March 11, 2020
- Channel Business Partners, Exakis Nelite Calls on BitTitan to Achieve a Large-Scale Migration in Record Time, March 11, 2020
- Le Monde Informatique, Alstrom Migrated to Office 365 in One Month, March 12, 2020
- Startup365, BitTitan Bolsters Americas Sales Team With Addition of New Sales Director, April 6, 2020
- IT for Business Magazine, Alstom: 40,000 migrated emails in one weekend, July 1, 2020
- Animasoft, How Do I Migrate From SharePoint On-Premises To Office 365?, Nov. 10, 2020
- InfoDSI, How Do I Migrate From SharePoint On-Premises To Office 365?, Nov. 10, 2020
- IT Channel, How Do I Migrate From SharePoint On-Premises To Office 365?, Nov. 10, 2020
- ITR Games, How Do I Migrate From SharePoint On-Premises To Office 365?, Nov. 10, 2020
- ITR Manager, How Do I Migrate From SharePoint On-Premises To Office 365?, Nov. 10, 2020
- ITR Software, How Do I Migrate From SharePoint On-Premises To Office 365?, Nov. 10, 2020
- L’Entreprise Connectee, How Do I Migrate From SharePoint On-Premises To Office 365?, Nov. 10, 2020
- ZDNet, The strategic value of IT for successful mergers and acquisitions, Nov. 16, 2020
Germany
- Versicherungsbetriebe, Use collaboration solution in a future-proof manner, May 15, 2020
- Digital Business Cloud, Virtual collaboration: This is how migration works in Microsoft Teams, June 5, 2020
- Cloud Computing Insider, The smart way to switch to Microsoft 365, July 9, 2020
- Data Center Insider, The smart way to switch to Microsoft 365, July 9, 2020
- Manage IT, One hundred percent in the cloud: How it works, Aug. 7, 2020
- Storage Insider, The smart way to switch to Microsoft 365, Aug. 10, 2020
- Line-of-Biz, This is how the migration to Office 365 succeeds, Sept. 10, 2020
- Windows Pro, Migrate from Exchange to Microsoft 365 with MigrationWiz from BitTitan, Sept. 18, 2020
- ComputerWoche, IT Modernization: Freshen up instead of mucking out, Oct. 6, 2020
- SharePoint 360, This is how the successful migration from SharePoint On-Premises to Office 365 succeeds, Oct. 26, 2020
India
- DQ Channels, Exclusive Interview – Mark Kirstein, VP, Products, MigrationWiz, BitTitan, May 5, 2020
- Express Computer, Now is the time: How migrating to cloud can enable business continuity and success, May 7, 2020
- Analytics India Magazine, Use Automation To Migrate Workloads to Cloud, says Mark Kirstein of BitTitan, May 10, 2020
- Express Computer, BitTitan expands partner ecosystem in India for MigrationWiz cloud services, May 13, 2020
- CRN India, BitTitan expands partner ecosystem in India for MigrationWiz cloud services, May 13, 2020
- DQ Channels, BitTitan expands partner ecosystem for MigrationWiz cloud services, May 13, 2020
- Technology for You, BitTitan expands partner ecosystem in India for MigrationWiz cloud services, May 16, 2020
- Technuter, “BitTitan works with managed service providers, who partner with businesses of various sizes to advise and guide their cloud migrations” – By, Mr. Mark Kirstein, Vice President of Products, BitTitan, June 1, 2020
- TechGig, 5 Trends transforming cloud computing, June 17, 2020
- Techniexpert, Easy Solution to Migrate IT Needs – BitTitan, June 30, 2020
- Bangalore Insider, BitTitan: A Saas software company, Aug. 21, 2020
- Smart State India, The Future is Bright for the Cloud in India, Aug. 22, 2020
- My Mobile India, Q&A with Brad Rosairo, Nov. 4, 2020
- Smart State India, Maximize M&A ROI With Cloud Computing and Smart IT Integration, Nov. 18, 2020
Recently, I was asked to describe the purpose of a communication toolkit and thought it would be helpful to provide some details on what they are and how people use them.
The communication toolkit typically includes ready-made materials or template materials that can be customized by others to aid them in achieving a particular goal. The goal might be education, crisis communication, providing talking points to partners or helping employees be better brand ambassadors.
Consider the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention’s (CDC) creation of a COVID-19 Vaccination Communication Toolkit. In this case, the CDC has created materials that can be used by healthcare teams to build confidence about COVID-19 vaccinations. These materials are for medical centers, clinics and clinicians, but are also accessible to the general public on the CDC website.
When we inspect their toolkit, we find an impressive array of materials, including:
- Tips on Getting Started. An introduction to six strategies that healthcare professionals can use to build vaccine confidence within the health system or clinic, along with companion tools such as a communication readiness checklist and tips on how to start the conversation. The six strategies include:
- Encouraging senior leaders to be vaccine champions.
- Hosting discussions where personnel can ask questions.
- Sharing key messages with staff through emails, breakroom posters, and other channels.
- Educating teams about the vaccines and how they were developed.
- Educating non-medical staff about the importance of getting vaccinated. And,
- Making the decision to get vaccinated visible, and celebrating it.
- Fact sheets and FAQs. These downloadable materials help educate healthcare teams and other staff working in your facilities to help them communicate effectively and accurately.
- Posters. These can be downloaded, printed and hung in breakrooms and other places to foster discussions and remind people about the importance of vaccinations.
- Stickers. The CDC has created printable stickers for staff to wear to show they’ve gotten their vaccine.
- Presentation Slides. There are three prepared slide decks with associated scripts that people can use for educational purposes. They’re titled:
- “Building Vaccine Confidence in Health Systems and Clinics: Tips for Immunization/Vaccine Coordinators,”
- “COVID-19 Vaccine Basics: What Healthcare Personnel Need to Know,” and
- “Building Confidence in COVID-19 Vaccines Among Your Patients: Tips for the Healthcare Team.”
- Social Media. The toolkit includes sample messages for use on Facebook, Instagram and Twitter.
- Video. There is also a CDC video, “How CDC is Making COVID-19 Vaccine Recommendations.”
Another reason to use a communication toolkit is when a company has third parties that need to communicate on their behalf and they want to arm them with accurate information. For instance, many years ago I worked on a campaign for MasterCard in which we developed a toolkit for banks that were issuing MasterCard credit and debit cards and needed to know how they differed from other payment solutions.
In other instances, a company may want its employees to be able to communicate effectively on a topic. If the organization is large, the company may want to create a toolkit that employees can use in their communications, especially if the organization has a small marketing or communications staff and is looking for its employees to be ambassadors on a particular topic.
Over the years, we have provided a wide range of toolkits to help organizations and their partners and stakeholders communicate more effectively and efficiently. If you’re interested in how we can help you develop these materials or understand how they might be employed to help you educate key audiences, build thought leadership, or simply get the word out about a particular issue or event, please reach out.
Passive voice is a sentence construction in the English language that people can use without thinking but is also a tool that writers can use maliciously. Listed among George Orwell’s “swindles and perversions” of writing, it’s important to recognize when you use passive voice and consider if it’s the best choice for your sentence.
What Is Passive Voice?
English sentences usually follow a pattern, subject–verb–object, reflected in “Lauren ate the cookies.” Passive voice follows a different pattern, object–verb–subject, resulting in a sentence like “The cookies were eaten by Lauren.” This grammatical construction also allows for the subject, the one doing the action, to be dropped from the author’s sentence completely, becoming “The cookies were eaten.”
In English, the first words of a sentence carry more weight. In a passive construction, this means there’s more emphasis on the object of the sentence and a de-emphasis of the subject doing the action. The difference between the active and the passive sentences is stark, as the passive voice obscures or removes the connection between me, the subject, and my actions, eating the cookies.
One way to identify if a sentence uses passive voice is to look for forms of “to be” followed by a past participle. This can be “was used,” “is given,” “have been chosen,” “being named,” or many other similar combinations.
Please note that not every sentence that contains a form of “have” or “be” is passive; the sentences “Jennifer has a dog,” or “Colleen is an American,” are both active constructions. Additionally, there are grammatically active constructions that avoid using the subject in the sentence. For example, compared to “Lauren burnt the cookies,” “The cookies burned” uses an active voice while evading pointing to who caused this to happen.
What Issues Can Passive Voice Cause?
Back in May, the New York Times tweeted about an article they published covering the protests with these three sentences:
The internet erupted upon noticing that the protesters’ actions were described with an active voice while the police’s actions were passive. The tweet seems to avoid placing the onus of the journalists’ injuries on the police in the first and third sentences while placing the protesters in an active role in the second sentence.
Upon reading the article linked in the tweet, the sentences seem to be pulled directly from the article. The tweet was likely not intentionally disconnecting police from the violence they caused but highlights the importance of critically considering the use of passive voice.
However, I would recommend you don’t write off all uses of the passive voice as mistakes or unconscious choices. The ability to hide or even remove mention of the subject of a sentence is a powerful tool.
For example, “Management furloughed more women than men,” recognizes management as responsible for their decision. “More women were furloughed than men,” seemingly absolves individuals in management of their accountability, puts the focus on who the action is being done to and, especially in this case, makes the problem seem nebulous and unapproachable.
Active voice offers the subject the agency and responsibility for their actions. It’s often more truthful, better describes cause-and-effect situations and demonstrates a better understanding of the context.
When Can I Use Passive Voice?
There are still perfectly good times to use passive voice:
- When the action is done by an unknown subject (“The toys were donated.”)
- When the subject cannot or should not be disclosed (“The cookies and milk were consumed.”)
- When the focus is on the object of the sentence (“The package was delivered.”)
In this blog I used passive voice in a non-problematic way: “… the protesters’ actions were described with an active voice…” I used passive voice because I didn’t know who crafted that tweet and didn’t want to pretend that I did.
To improve your writing and your critical media consumption skills, learn to recognize and consider the use of passive voice. Be aware of the issues that passive voice can cause. When you’re writing, ask yourself why you’re using this style and if passive voice is interfering with your sentence’s ability to be clear and truthful. When in doubt, rewrite your sentence so no one must ask, “Who did this?”